[HOLY S**T!] solo hip hop weekly

[Piper the Great]

check this dude out he got fire lyrics yhm

[Heru]

Is that you?

Whoever it is, he's pretty good. Lyrics and flow is tight, what he doesn't have much of is mic presence, confidence, and delivery. Whether sitting down or standing up you should have the liveness and gestures going, it's part of the mc's charisma.

[Piper the Great]

that's one of my rounds. I told him to stop doing them just sitting on the damn couch. Ima pass the feedback to him

[Heru]

that's one of my rounds. I told him to stop doing them just sitting on the damn couch. Ima pass the feedback to him

Yeah, pass that on, he need to add charisma and energy to his delivery and performance. That's what separates just spitting a verse from performing. He can even do it sitting down, but it'd be better if he stood up. He can do it inside, but it'd be better if he was outside. He can do it while he was dolo, but it'd be better if he had his boys hyping it, etc.

Like I said dukes lyrics and flow is tight, but if he's gonna take it to the next level, gotta step it up in those areas.

[Piper the Great]

i told him and he side thanks for the feedback

[Heru]

No problem...