[HOLY S**T!] because of the good feedback ill give yall one more track by me...

[BIG IS BACK!]

just a sample i have another verse on there and a singer on a verse ... lol i just did this today so yall gettin the exclusive... **** beautiful imo this might be one of the last i give yall i dn tho.. its jsut gon depend on the day... i usually sell it...


but some real ass **** on this track man... listen to the lyrics and see if u can relate

i see myself in a concert ****in killin this **** mayne

hahaaaaaaa

man... **** almost brought me tears writing it .. so know this some real ass ****



even if u didnt like the other one give this a listen bc i feel like it can relate to more ppl.. its not as dark...



MP3

[My Name Is...]

Damn homie that **** is FIRE!!!

That beat is phuckin cold. Bring out your vocals a bit more. But I like your laid back style and deep voice. And with production like that if you keep it out there, you can hit.

Just be ready when that door opens because it closes faster than it opens.

[BIG IS BACK!]

lol good looks man


thanks for telling me to bring up the vocals.. i do everything at home here n have em saved still... ill do that for the final track def....


thanks for the feedback hommie

[j]

it's not that bad actually. the vocals sound like they need to be "cleaned" up a little to me also.

track was really nice.

i didn't care for "*****" in the chorus.....sounded out of place.

you do your own production?

if i remember, i will pass on to some up and coming people in the game for you.

[Tuggers1986]

I'm not feeling the ***** in the chorus either, and the vocals need to be higher. Apart from that it's a good track.