[The Official Poetry/Flow Thread.] can you rhyme, can you flow, can you spit?

[Sin City]

how bout poetry? you do that too?
then this is a thread for you!
you can battle, you can war!
you can post anything as long as you expressing yourself,
thats what this thread is for!
show me what you got and I will show you mine
but expect to get flamed if you post in my thread,
and your ***** ass can't rhyme!
so lets get this **** started!
you can be intelligent, insightful, get dumb or ******ed.
anything goes,
oh and if you get burnt.. please don't act like no hoes!
I dont want anyone posting **** that aint theres either
if you do you run the risk of getting mauled worst then jay-z on the track ether!


ok...
first person up? any takers?

[Sin City]

Undefeated where u @? I know u love flowing, since the thread in Latin Lounge didn't do well.. take the floor here!

[platinummatt!]

Crackers got cheap **** in dey bags,
theyre going huff huff
fools dont trip come to me I got the good stuff,
Spittin 9 millimetres, red hot, ****, aint no bluff,

pretty ****, but I dont care

[kayjay]

I ain't scared of a little flame
in fact I bet your flame is lame
you already know my name
but do you know about my game?
I'll put you to shame
and you'll have no one but yourself to blame

[kayjay]

I'll give you a little rhyme
because I have some extra time
you used to go by the name of Vick
but as sin city you're sill a prick

[Sin City]

I'll give you a little rhyme
because I have some extra time
you used to go by the name of Vick
but as sin city you're sill a prick

Look people.. its another indian to tame.
your civilisation was whiped out boy, you aint got game!
Kaygay you dont want to **** with me
you sound like you ride the short bus when you get at me lyrically.
but sirously, your in way over your head.
I'll do like the cowboys did on you, and this indian will be dead. lol

[platinummatt!]

mmmmmmmm baby Im chocolatey smmmoooooth,
Baby ya ***** fulla **** and ya mouth fulla vermouuuuuuutthhhh,
mmmmm baby, ***** you know I love it when go downnnnnnnn,
and then when I spray your face hoe, you know im finished,
Im never coming back arrrrrouuuuuunnddd

[Sin City]

mmmmmmmm baby Im chocolatey smmmoooooth,
Baby ya ***** fulla **** and ya mouth fulla vermouuuuuuutthhhh,
mmmmm baby, ***** you know I love it when go downnnnnnnn,
and then when I spray your face hoe, you know im finished,
Im never coming back arrrrrouuuuuunnddd

lmao.. funny. good ****.

[platinummatt!]

mmmm sin you mayyy bee laaaauughin nooooowww,
but that ****ll stop when when I take it oooouuuut,
your facell be fulllaaa shockkkk,
and a second later, you mouth fulla cooockkk

[kayjay]

You make light of my ancestry
but your grandmother tried to ****** me
My revenge has been exacted
when your momma's ass with **** I packed it
This is gonna be so easy
like when in the Dome I flamed with sleazy
Vick will boost kayjay to glory
first let me tell you a little story
'bout when everybody's favorite poster
took the Scene on a roller coaster
made hate threads aimed at all the races
and abandoned all his social graces
even flamed the owner Rick
and said Poppa sucks on his ****
then when the mods they tried to ban
our hero devised another plan
he found another way to post
by coming back as his own Ghost